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Friday, August 9, 2019

My Narrative Writing

Kate and the terrifying cave trip
Kate glanced across at Jessica and noticed that she was nervous too. The guides had checked everyone’s equipment thoroughly and now the group was about to abseil down a sheer rock face into the eerie, unknown depths of a cave.

Once Kate and everyone arrived in the cave she started to cry, she cried because one of the crystals fell down and blocked the exit, everyone started to panic then the guides, told them to stop because they have pickaxes.

The guides went up to the crystal and started to pick them with their pickaxes, when the guides stop picking the crystal cracked and they quickly ran back outside because the cave was collapsing, when they went outside and got to the car, when they reached the car they realised that one of the guides that picacts the crystal is bleeding, so they rushed him to the hospital, luckily they reached the hospital in time, and after the guide got better and they went out for some chicken, and they decided to eat at the beach. 

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