Narrative Writing (:
This Is A Made Up Story
It was a very amazing day on the mountains, I landed my first trick on my mountain bike !!!, it was amazing. I am so proud of myself.
I went up the mountains with my mates and had a little ride on the trail. All my mates were doing cool tricks and I decided to try one and one of my mates captured my trick !!!, it looked so cool, I did a little 360 and landed. But there was a problem.
When I landed my bike my tire landed but the tire bent and I couldn't ride again so I had to walk down the mountain, but then I remembered that I packed some spare parts inside of my backpack, so I got them out and fixed my bike and started riding my bike again.
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In my Literacy class we started doing narratives, here is my draft. It is a made up story !, This inst finished because it was very hard to find a idea to write about, and I also struggled to write about mountain biking because I have never tried it. I am going to add some changes to it so it can be very good and interesting.
Dear Heavenly Father, Guide me to be like Jesus and not like the Disciples, guide me too have faith in myself for when I am feeling like I have no faith in myself. 
